Novel / Literary historical fiction
Alas, Dreamland
At Coney Island's Dreamland in 1904, a nurse who keeps premature babies alive in glass incubators is caught between the lion tamer she's promised to and the quiet electrician who notices everything, while the park burns its way toward the fire of 1911.

- Status
- Complete draft, revising
- Length
- 158,701 words · about 12 hours
- This draft
- Complete draft, August 2025
Dreamland opened before the paint dried: a million electric bulbs, a tower you could see for miles, a ride called Hell Gate, and, between the lions and the roller coasters, Dr. Couney's exhibit of real premature babies in glass boxes, a quarter to look. Minnie Thompson is the nurse who keeps them breathing. She's engaged to George Dressler, the German lion tamer whose act anchors the park, and she has learned to hold her breath every time the cage door closes behind him.
Then James Harris arrives to keep the wiring alive. He's careful and quiet, carrying his dead brother's stopped watch and a name that isn't quite his own. Over seven seasons of storms, winter repairs, bad money and one lion that won't forgive anybody, the three of them circle each other in a place built to look permanent and made of fresh lumber and electricity. The book opens on the night it all burns. The rest is how they got there.
Heads up: this book deals with fire and disaster, serious injury and amputation, alcoholism, grief, the illness and death of infants.
- PrologueThe Discovery
- Chapter 1The Fire and The Fightearlier draft
- Chapter 2The Roarearlier draft
- Chapter 3Night Rounds
- Chapter 4The Arrival
- Chapter 5First Spark
- Chapter 6The Elephant Hotel
- Chapter 7The King's Court
- Chapter 8Mechanical Hearts
- Chapter 9The Public and Private
- Chapter 10The Past
- Chapter 11Caesar's Warning
- Chapter 12The Thunderstorm
- Chapter 13Fighting the Flames
- Chapter 14Performance Review
- Chapter 15The Lilliputian's Wisdom
- Chapter 16Swimming in Electric Light
- Chapter 17Trip to the Moon
- Chapter 18The Proposal
- Chapter 19Witness
- Chapter 20The Infant Incubators at Night
- Chapter 21Winter Maintenance
- Chapter 22Spring Returns
- Chapter 23The New Procedure
- Chapter 24Earthquake News
- Chapter 25Lilliputian Village
- Chapter 26The Tango
- Chapter 27The Dance Halls
- Chapter 28Caesar's Rebellion
- Chapter 29Night Medicine
- Chapter 30The Letter
- InterludeElizabeth's Night Duty
- Chapter 31Shoot the Chutes
- Chapter 32The Lilliputian Wedding
- Chapter 33The Bowery
- Chapter 34Couney's Diagnosis
- Chapter 35The Arm
- Chapter 36New Jersey Calling
- Chapter 37Feltman's
- Chapter 38Richardson's Proposition
- Chapter 39The Unraveling
- Chapter 40The Dragon's Gorge
- Chapter 41Hope's Crisis
- Chapter 42Winter Ultimatum
- Chapter 43Christmas Choices
- Chapter 44Winter Storm
- Chapter 45Steeplechase
- InterludeDr. Couney's Presentation
- Chapter 46Professional Authority
- Chapter 47Emergency Leadership
- Chapter 48Innovation Initiative
- Chapter 49Future Planning
- Chapter 50Public Recognition
- Chapter 51The Airship Building
- Chapter 52The Boardwalk Prophet
- Chapter 53Summer Diseases
- Chapter 54Luna Park
- Chapter 55Couney's Last Lesson
- InterludeCharlie's Last Rounds
- Chapter 56Professional Distance
- Chapter 57Winter Planning
- Chapter 58The Panic of 1908
- Chapter 59The Whip
- Chapter 60Reduced Circumstances
- Chapter 61The Charity Case
- Chapter 62The Last Season
- Chapter 63One Last Tour
- Chapter 64Fighting the Flames
- Chapter 65Hell Gate
- InterludeRichardson's Reckoning
- Chapter 66The Haunted Swing
- Chapter 67Animal Instincts
- Chapter 68Creation
- Chapter 69The Lilliputian Village Says Goodbye
- Chapter 70Summer Heat
- Chapter 71Labor Day Collapse
- Chapter 72Winter Preparations
- Chapter 73Spring 1911 - Final Season Begins
- Chapter 74George's Warning
- Chapter 75The Day Before
- Chapter 76The Fire Begins
- Chapter 77Redemption in Flames
- Chapter 78The Morning After
- EpilogueAll the Premature Thingsearlier draft
Version history2 drafts
Current · August 2025
Complete draft
The full book, framed by Minnie's recovered journals. George now starts with both arms and loses one to Caesar in 1906, the opening frame of an archivist finding the journals was added, and the ending moved from a Miami Beach reunion scene to the historian closing the last journal.
Earlier · July 2025
First draft
Three chapters that survive from the first draft: the fire-night opening, the first night in the lion arena, and the original Miami Beach epilogue. In this draft George has already lost his arm when the story begins.