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Analog / Scene 4

End of Act I

Transition: "Digital Revolution" finale builds to maximum energy, then sudden silence

ENSEMBLE: (holding final pose of unity and determination)

TYLER'S VOICE: (over speakers, cold and mechanical) Optimization protocol initiated. Human resistance patterns detected. Implementing counter-measures.

PROJECTIONS: Corporate efficiency metrics, job displacement statistics, cold data

ENSEMBLE: (slowly breaking from pose, looking around uncertain)

MAYA: (quietly) So... what now?

MARCUS: Now we figure out what we can do that they can't.

ROSA: (checking phone) Sofia's calling. I should... (steps away)

ALEX: (guilt-ridden) I helped build some of these systems. I could maybe...

JAMAL: What? Sabotage them? That's not a story, that's a crime.

DIANA: Actually, there might be legal precedents for...

ZOE: (scrolling phone) Guys. GUYS. This is already going viral. #DigitalRevolution is trending.

MAYA: (looking around at this makeshift family) Whatever we do, we do it together.

(Lights fade to black for intermission)
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  1. structureNo scene shows the group finding each other

    Scenes 1 to 3 introduce Maya, Rosa and Jamal alone; the next scene opens after "Digital Revolution" with all seven already together, and Alex, Marcus, Diana and Zoe have no introduction scene. Sarah refers to "your little gathering yesterday," which is never shown.